Sentence Fluency


Sentence Fluency refers to the way words and phrases flow through the piece. It is the auditory trait because it’s “read” with the ear as much as the eye.
Sentence Fluency is the rhythm and flow of the language, the sound of word patterns, the way in which the writing plays to the ear, not just to the eye. How does it sound when read aloud? That’s the test. Fluent writing has cadence, power, rhythm, and movement. It is free of awkward word patterns that slow the reader’s progress. Sentences vary in length, beginnings, structure, and style, and are so well crafted that the writer moves through the piece with ease.

You can use the scoring guide below to help you find where the piece of writing you are drafting is situated. If you are conferencing the piece with your teacher, it is recommended that Sentence Fluency be one of the Six Traits you ask for feedback on.

 Exceptional

65

 A. Crafting Well-Built Sentences: The writer carefully and creatively constructs sentences for maximum impact. Transition words such as but, and, and so are used successfully to join sentences and sentence parts.

B. Varying Sentence Types: The writer uses various types of sentences (simple, compound, and/or complex) to enhance the central theme or storyline.The piece is made up of an effective mix of long, complex sentences and short, simple ones.

C. Capturing Smooth and Rhythmic Flow: The writer thinks about how the sentences sound. He or she uses phrasing that is almost musical. If the piece were read aloud, it would be easy on the ear.

D. Breaking the “Rules” to Create Fluency: The writer diverges from standard English to create interest and impact. For example, he or she may use a sentence fragment, such as “All alone in the forest,” or a single word, such as “Bam!” to accent a particular moment or action. He or she might begin with informal words such as well, and, or but to create a conversational tone, or he or she might break rules intentionally to make dialogue sound authentic.

Strong

 

43

Refining

A. Crafting Well-Built Sentences: The writer offers simple sentences that are sound, but no long, complex ones. He or she attempts to vary the beginnings and lengths of sentences.

B. Varying Sentence Types: The writer exhibits basic sentence sense and offers some sentence variety. He or she attempts to use different types of sentences, but in doing so creates an uneven flow rather than a smooth, seamless one.

C. Capturing Smooth and Rhythmic Flow: The writer has produced a text that is uneven. Many sentences read smoothly, while others are choppy or awkward.

D. Breaking the “Rules” to Create Fluency: The writer includes fragments, but they seem more accidental than intentional. He or she uses informal words, such as well, and, and but, inappropriately to start sentences, and pays little attention to making dialogue sound authentic.

Developing

 

21

Emerging

A. Crafting Well-Built Sentences: The writer’s sentences, even simple ones, are often flawed. Sentence beginnings are repetitive and uninspired.

B. Varying Sentence Types: The writer uses a single, repetitive sentence pattern throughout or connects sentence parts with an endless string of transition words such as and, but, or, and because, which distracts the reader.

C. Capturing Smooth and Rhythmic Flow: The writer has created a text that is a challenge to read aloud since the sentences are incomplete, choppy, stilted, rambling, and/or awkward.

D. Breaking the “Rules” to Create Fluency: The writer offers few or no simple, well-built sentences, making it impossible to determine if he or she has done anything out of the ordinary. Global revision is necessary before sentences can be revised for stylistic and creative purposes.

Rudimentary